Studio Production: Mockumentary Development

In reflection of the feedback we got from Helen during the rough cut viewings. I have made some notes for the mockumentary as this was the VT which required the most changes. The other two VTs will just need extra footage and a few of the shots re-filmed so that we have a wider range of shots. However, the approach to the mockumentary will need to be changed significantly.
Helen felt that the one take style we had gone for was too simplified and didn't tell us enough about who the character was. I agree with this as the set was dressed to reflect his character and none of this could be seen. To still get that documentary feel, we have decided to use an extra camera which will be responsible for the cutaways. Using an extra camera means that the shots will make sense with the continuity as they would have been able to get those whilst the action is happening. Helen also suggested that we utilised the cameras more and got some more close ups of Norman. I think this will dramatise the film somewhat and make it seem more sequenced.
The way we shot it meant that Norman spoke quite slowly with lots of 'erms'. However, when it came to cutting it for the rough cut, it meant that it seemed very dragged out and lost the interest of the viewer. Josh has decided that this VT will now be 2 1/2 minutes in length to allow for it to be cut down and less dragged out. I think this will engage the viewer for this time period and make it more enjoyable to watch. I'm glad that we were given the feedback we had as it has allowed us to strategise and plan some changes for the re shoot.