Monday, 11 December 2017

PRE-PRODUCTION: Critical Evaluation

Now that this unit has come to an end and the project is completed, it is vital to look back over the work I have done over the past term. This is to be able to critically evaluate the unit, with reference to the successes and what worked well, along with the challenges and what I would improve on if I were to complete the unit again. This will then allow me to see what I have learnt, going into the major project for the second term, with this in mind.

I chose to undertake the Professional Pre-Production option for the unit, as opposed to the Major Project Pre-Production. The entailed devising a hypothetical, industry scale Pre-Production package that would not go into the stage of production. I made this decision because the concept of creating something of industry scale was unlike anything we have done previously on the course. With every other unit, I have completed the pre-production for a project that would then be made. This meant that I had to think realistically to a student sized project and budget, limiting me somewhat. Other factors regarding my choices for the Major project later on in the year, which will entail working on a stand alone project, also affected my choices for this unit as I wanted to have the experiences of working alone and working in a group in my final year. For the unit, I decided to create a Crime/Thriller drama series entitled 'Motherhood'. My choices for the genre of the production were based on research of Television programmes I enjoy watching myself, and was therefore based on my personal interests. I felt like this was an important decision to make because I wanted it to be of the nature of programme I am drawn to as a viewer. 

In terms of the successes for this unit, there are lots of elements that I am happy with. The decisions for each element of the package took a considerable amount of time and experimentation with, therefore I am pleased with most. Addressing the story line and central themes of the series first, as this went through a number of changes within the first few weeks. I started the unit with a basic list of the plot line. After a meeting with Simon, he suggested there was no theme or strong characterisation that would hold the audiences attention and keep them invested in the series. Struggling to come up with a substantial story, I took it back to some key themes of family, abduction and then later Motherhood specifically, before writing the character of Vivian who would become the main character of the series. Using these as a  basis to work with was really helpful for writing the story around for the synopsis, characters and opening script. Along with research and feedback from Simon, I managed to develop the story, and give it a purpose to be told. 
I am also pleased with my choice for the Broadcasting Channel in particular. There were a few early doubts from Simon about whether Netflix would be the most suitable choice. However, after going away and researching other channels, I was confident in my initial choice. 
The genres, characters, themes and initial branding for the series were all suitable for the platform and were created almost with the channel in mind. Given the audience choices, I also think that Netflix is the best option in terms of schedule and accessibility, as the audience are able to watch it in their own time, giving them more freedom. 
The branding and advertising has been successful, not only for its suitability for Netflix but I think in terms of its suitability to the series. This element of the package, I am particularly pleased with because Graphics are not my strong point. However, I wanted to challenge myself and really experiment with photoshop to achieve something that looked creative and professional. This was also rather a challenge as I didn't have access to the Actors and so had to rely on stock photography. This made it difficult to find the right kind of images and in good quality to use with photoshop. However, I am very pleased with the outcomes. 
Overall, I am very pleased with the overall look and content of the book. Using In-Design to create it, I was very particular about the presentation and content. I think the choice to do a book instead of a website was also a good decision as it became much more about the creative writing as opposed to the imagery, and therefore would not have worked so well as a website. 

The biggest challenges for me during this unit were the creative writing elements. This included the character development. I found it rather challenging to devise characters that all had a background and reasoning for all of their actions. I overcame this by thinking about each one in terms of their past experiences to make them more 3D and relatable. The casting choices were a challenge and some of them were altered. Writing for an industry scale production, but not a feature film makes it challenging to find actors that are not unrealistic. Therefore, my research for the casting included choosing actors of the appropriate ages and appearance and then watching some of their previous work to access their suitability. Although, this was challenging, I am happy with the final choices I have made and the decisions for each cast member, adding to the development of the project. 
During the process of writing the book, I decided that the content became much more of a focal point than the imagery and visual side of the production. Therefore, after talking to Simon, I changed the package contents to write an opening script instead of the opening titles. I made this decision because I felt like I hadn't properly engaged in the process of the opening titles and didn't want to make them a last minute element and not give them attention to detail. Having worked on my synopsis across several drafts, I felt like an opening script would be a suitable alternative and better the creative writing aspect of the project. Overall, I am pleased with this decision and the final draft of the script. 

To conclude with what I have learnt from this unit, I would say that research was incredibly important for this unit. As I was unable to do any primary research, I relied on online material to make the important decisions. Working with Simon in the tutorials was also beneficial to understand what ideas needed to be revised and what I could improve on to develop the project further. 
Although, I faced several challenges in this unit, and made some big changes, I am pleased with the book and the work I have completed in the short amount of time. This unit has been the most independent so far and really pushed me to work hard to complete each element of the package to a good standard. 

Friday, 8 December 2017

PRE-PRODUCTION: Motherhood Opening Script (Final Draft)

Here I have attached the final draft of the opening script for Motherhood. The final changes I made were to the storyline. Simon suggested that the audience do not find out much during the script, other than that Elise has been abducted and her parents are looking for her. I was deliberating over whether to show the audience what was going on behind Vivian's back at the park but decided that it would add to the storytelling and be a shocking reveal moment. During the Police investigation scene, I added some short flashback scenes that show the abductor creeping into the scene. Overall, I am pleased with the script and think that the changes have really added to it.
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PRE-PRODUCTION: Book Creation & Reflections

For the presentation of the work from this unit, I decided to create a book. This was the more popular option among students, however, other options including creating a website were available to us. I felt like a book would be the best option as I wanted to create something physical rather than online. I also made this decision as I felt like it would be more of a challenge and something I haven't had experience doing before.

I decided early on to create the book using InDesign which is an Adobe programme. I felt like this would be the best option as I would have total freedom with the placement of text and imagery. As I would also be working with Photoshop imagery, it seemed like a wise decision to use two Adobe programmes as they would be able to support each other.

Once I began to write the book, I realised there was plenty of information to write, confirming that it was the right decision to do a book instead of a website. The websites look best if they are visual based as it is not very exciting to read lots of text on a website. However, as a book, text is more suitable and easy to read. I had not used InDesign before but found it relatively simple and easy to use. In terms of the placement of imagery and text, it was very effective. You can zoom right into the pages and mark exactly where you want each element on the page, therefore I think in terms of the presentation, InDesign was the right choice.
Some challenges I faced with the creation of the book included online imagery not being crisp and in focus. With some images that are obtained from the internet, they will be of good resolution in a pdf file, but when placed on the InDesign programme appear to be pixelated and blurry. To overcome this issue, I had to research and find several suitable images and choose the ones that were of the best quality on the programme. There was also an issue with the arrangement of the text, as the programme will split the last word of a sentence and put the rest of it on the next line which looked rather unsightly. To overcome this, I would press the enter button to push the last word onto the next line so that none of the words were split. Although this was frustrating, I was able to alter this and set the layout to my preferences. Below are some screenshots of a few pages in the book on InDesign. The text and imagery was very carefully arranged to ensure that the presentation was of a good standard.

The Idea

Casting

Broadcasting Channel

Visual Style

Branding

In reflection, InDesign was a good choice to make for the book creation and I am very happy with the appearance and quality of it. However, some of the visual imagery has suffered due to the printed image not showing the exact colouring as on the screen. For example, in the branding imagery, some elements have printed very dark, where they are more defined on screen. This was a risk to take, however, as the book is more content based, as opposed to visual based, the work has not suffered too much, and I am pleased with the overall appearance and result.

Monday, 4 December 2017

PRE-PRODUCTION: Motherhood Opening Script (Second Draft)

Here I have attached the pages from the opening script for Motherhood (Second Draft). Simon gave me feedback after the first draft and suggested some changes to make for improvement for the second draft. The changes made include ensuring I am using American terms throughout such as 'Mom' instead of 'Mum' and using American titles for characters including Detective Reed, who I initially had titled 'Inspector'. Although, an Inspector is a titled used for the American policing system, I decided that Detective was much more suitable and recognisable to audiences. I have also added some more description for the locations, to set the scene. Another pointer that was flagged up was the use of the term 'neighbour', suggesting that it could sound too British. I had not thought about this prior to writing the script. However, I have since researched the term and the variations including 'neighbourhood' are in fact Americanised terms as opposed to British terms. Therefore, I have continued to use it for this draft and throughout the project. However, looking back now, I am still not completely sure about some of the story elements in the script, and think I would like to make further changes to some of the scenes to dramatise them a little more.


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