Friday, 8 December 2017

PRE-PRODUCTION: Motherhood Opening Script (Final Draft)

Here I have attached the final draft of the opening script for Motherhood. The final changes I made were to the storyline. Simon suggested that the audience do not find out much during the script, other than that Elise has been abducted and her parents are looking for her. I was deliberating over whether to show the audience what was going on behind Vivian's back at the park but decided that it would add to the storytelling and be a shocking reveal moment. During the Police investigation scene, I added some short flashback scenes that show the abductor creeping into the scene. Overall, I am pleased with the script and think that the changes have really added to it.
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