PRE-PRODUCTION: Episodes Synopsis (Second Draft)

Given the feedback from Simon regarding the first draft of the episodes synopsis, I have made some rather substantial changes. He suggested that the pilot episode was a little dull, taking far too long to reach the triggering event where Elise is abducted, recommending that I start the first episode with this incident instead. Moving this event forward meant that everything else in the first draft was moved forward also. This actually ended up being a very positive thing as the events of the second half of the series felt very rushed and all happened extremely suddenly. I have decided to give more light to certain characters also and embellish on events like the supermarket scene, choosing to publicly shame her, alienating her from the neighbourhood. I think there are still some alterations to be made regarding the level of detail and paying more attention to this in some of the scenes in particular.

Episode 1

Episodes 2 & 3

Episodes 4 & 5

Episode 6