Since making some final changes to the second draft of the episodes synopsis, I have now completed the third and final draft which will be put into the book. The story has remained the same but I have moved some of the events around and given more detail to certain aspects to dramatise the scenes a little more. Although I found it difficult to keep each episode to a minimum amount of words, I allowed a higher word count for the pilot episode. I decided to do this to incorporate more of background to the episode and give the reader more insight to the series at the beginning. Other changes I made included giving some of the other characters more detailed scenes and input to the story so that the overall story had more complexity to it.
The ending is something that I spent a long time deliberating over whether to change it, however, I finally decided that I thought a tragic ending for Vivian was the right ending. Given her decisions throughout the series, I felt like the most realistic outcome was to have her institutionalised at the end, whilst still resolving the changes to her life and the way she feels about those changes. As I have now placed the synopses into book from word, I have included the screenshots from them in their final form.
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| Episode 1 |
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| Episodes 2 & 3 |
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| Episodes 4 & 5 |
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| Episode 6 |
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